Thursday, April 24, 2014

Week 2 - Adapting to Beauty Writing

Hello all. I hope all your internships are going swimmingly. Most of you are likely to have no idea about my placement so I’ll give you a quick brief. I’m at The Communications Store – a PR agency in London which specialises in beauty, fashion and lifestyle. I am working with beauty.

In my second week at TCS got my first chance to write a media release. I felt quite privileged to do this as it meant they were trusting me with a task to send out to all their media contacts (although I suppose they could have changed their mind if it wasn’t good enough).

The release was for festival season; every year in England when the annual summer festivals (such as Glastonbury) start to approach, the beauty team sends out a big ‘e-blast’ – this is virtually a press release sent via email. The main idea behind the e-blast is festival beauty essentials and how to best prepare for festival season. I thought about everything I learnt at University as I began approaching my press release. I thought about the inverted pyramid and what angle I should approach to best promote our clients, though before I began writing I thought it would be wise to look at previous examples of ‘e-blasts’.

To my surprise, these press releases didn’t seem to follow the kind of order I was taught about at University. I suppose this may be because of the type of features we’re targeting – rather than being solid chunks of writing, beauty pages tend to be just bits of writing here and there to support the products or images featured. Most of the press release examples I looked at had a ‘catchy’ heading, a sub-heading and then simply pictures of clients’ products and a blurb about each of them which linked them to the larger subject matter – i.e. festival season. I suppose some aspects of the inverted pyramid were included; it's important to include where the items can be bought, how much they cost, why you should buy them, and what they achieve. However this is all based around a product, not an event or a newsworthy topic.

So I began writing. To be honest it felt kind of silly – I was writing about how dry shampoo can keep you looking glamorous without a shower etc, but this is the business, and I was interested to see how quickly I could adapt and learn in my new environment.

Jasmine who is a senior account executive looked over the ‘e-blast’ once I’d finished it, I even had to add a colourful exciting backdrop. Most of her corrections were small grammatical ones, and she was happy with the piece on the whole. I titled the e-blast “Festival Fresh” but she suggested “Festival Fabulous” as she believes the word ‘fresh’ has connotations of something being smelly. I personally feel that the word ‘fabulous’ is a far too over-done cliché, especially in beauty and fashion publications, but perhaps it has been used time and time again for a reason.

So voila, my ‘fabulous’ e-blast was completed and was sent out the next day. I think it’s a little early just yet for magazines to start working on festival stories, but of course it’s always good to get in first and get the ideas flowing for the journalists.

I would love to work on some more interesting strategies that TCS are doing for their clients. I overheard some of my co-workers talking about crisis management and wished I could hear what they were planning, and who for…


I can only hope that I build the trust of my co-workers so they include me in more of their work, or perhaps I should try to worm may way in a little more.

Well if any of you need to contact me you can probably find me in the TCS post room, sending trial products out to various journalists. You know, intern work.

Hang in there!
Jessie x

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